5 Hour Energy

5 Hour Energy Shot Commercial (Working Title)

brian rhoads

Int. Living Room

Kids run out of the frame as MAN turns towards camera with a slight chuckle. The room is set up like any type of living room you could imagine. An upbeat song is playing in the background.

MAN

Being a stay-at-home dad is pretty tough.

You've got errands to run, chores to do,

kids to chase, and everything in between.

Quick cuts of him doing different activities, like: sweeping, going through mail, bringing in groceries, checking his watch and being slightly frustrated, etc.

MAN

But things need to get done... now. Or else

the big boss lady will find out and I'll be in 

the dog house with this guy!

Shot of a dog with a sound of a whimper.

MAN

Luckily for me, I have "5 Hour Quick Energy 

Shot" to help me get through the day. Whether 

I need to be the maid, the chauffeur, the cook,

or whatever else my step daughters want me 

to be so that they wont tell their mom, I have

"5 Hour Quick Energy" to help me out.

Quick cut to the man sitting at a table (with no music). He has been crying and is staring deeply downward. He goes to take the energy shot and hesitates at first, but then finishes it. Cut back to him in the living room with the music back on. He looks as if nothing is wrong at all.

MAN

Thanks, "5 Hour Quick Energy Shot!"

Shot of logo with fine print with man in background doing something strenuous (like playing "pony" for one of his step daughters while dressed up like a princess).

ANNOUNCER (v/o)

5 Hour Quick Energy Shot, for when

you need energy for rock bottom. Now 

available in stores everywhere.

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